Beyond the Looking Glass

~*~ Close your eyes To your surprise Wake up never recognized.. Time beyond the looking glass Nonchalantly travels past Without a single question asked.. Judgmental eyes stare in vain A victim of a curious brain Begin at the beginning then start again.. Like falling down a rabbit hole With no control Inquisitiveness starts to take its toll.. Smiling felines and parties with tea Shedding enough tears to fill a sea Back to the door without a key.. Big and small and big again Decks of cards march like men Remorseful innocence not knowing where or when.. Painted red roses lined up in a bed Screams from a sovereign "Off with her head" Once ticking hands abruptly stop dead.. Have I gone crazy? Am I insane? “Curiouser and curiouser!” Again and again........ ~*~
For..Dream On Free Poetry Contest Details Debbie Guzzi
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Johnson Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 8:17 PM
This is one of my favorites. Nicely done. congratulations. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 7:53 PM
a nice win..PD
Guzzi Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Lovely sounding, rhyme & meter yet I was at a loss for images, senses, sounds of your own and not from the origin stories. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 9:55 AM
this is great, Tracie. Love all those allusions to Alice and Wonderland!!!
Merryman Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 7:17 AM
Welcome back, Tracie! This poem is fantabulous! I love it and it's going in my favs. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Oh just love this and I have asked my self that question 'have I gone insane' many times lol, still not sure of the answer. xx
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