Beyond the Door

Beyond the Door

When the Angel of Death arrived, I submitted to the passage as he signaled me and lured me to his carriage. Mighty black steeds pulled us. The trail became a tunnel; I stared steadfast at the light, hoping energy to funnel. Memories upset me and sharply I felt the pain of each person I had harmed pursuing my own gain. In this tunnel I revisited every moment I’d spent on Earth. Flailing in self-imposed hell, I doubted my life's worth. As we came ever closer to the eternal tunnel’s light, my soul was overcome by a sense of great hope, not fright. When the carriage stopped before a luminescent pearly door, cautiously I disembarked onto a fluffy white floor. It was then that peace engaged my heart and I heard their voices – soft words of those who stood by me regardless of my choices. Turning the knob, I entered the realm where those I’d loved lived on. Although I’d been a sinner and believed the best times were gone, I found that hope and forgiveness waited on the other side. In my heart hymns of angels restored and amplified.
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Wesley Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 11:06 PM
Well, you opened the door to my mind just enough to see into yours dear Carolyn. You express one of lifes great mysteries with such feeling.
Haick Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 1:56 AM
You Rock Seafaress!! This is so beautiful; the imagery is captivating. I love the serenityI feel when reading this. Paula will love this, I am sure. I will add this to my "Favs List"! Love and hugs, Audrey
B Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Beautifully crafted piece of inspiration and truth written with great imagery, ending with soft and soothing comfort. Great poem Mrs. Carolyn
Austin Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Love the positive, loving note in this one. Kind of casts fear aside. Hope you are enjoying your vacation. Love, Dave
Song Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 7:15 AM
Things never are what they seem, Dear Carolyn. They are even BETTER WITH GOD! I thoroughly enjoyed this spiritual ride this morning. A wonderful, powerful, and energizing piece. The ending of this poem is harmonious...the welcome party of heaven will be spectacular. Forgiveness and eternal enlightenment is what comforts me the most. A huge hug to you this morning. I miss chatting with u thru your poetry. Gwendolen
Maverick Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 5:33 PM
An insightfull write Carolyn, yet none is righteous execept Him alone..i tell you this.! i have your best interests at heart.. God bless you by day and night.!
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September 26, 2011 at 2:55 PM
A glorious apparition, Carolyn! We are all sinners, of course, but thankfully the final judgement will be taken out of our hands...so there is a chance for us all. A powerful write! Hope you are well. xoxo Robert.
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 2:53 PM
~~~Magnificent~~~ Carolyn~~~ Love and blessings always, Carol
Horne Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Beautiful indeed, my friend. When my gran's brother was just about to die - he got TB in Italy, during WW2 - he told her that there was a long tunnel and that he had a long way to go, but he wasn't afraid as their mother was there. It always moves me to think of that : )
Sivey Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 11:31 PM
Wow, that's a great take on the "opened doors" contest! I really enjoyed the outstanding write especially the last stanza where it keeps me in awe, complete inspirational thoughts!! Awesome work!!
Johnson Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Dear Caroline. This is so beautiful and should be just what she wants to see in her contest. Are you back home? Hope you are feeling better. Love, Joyce
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