Beyond the Door

Beyond the Door

When the Angel of Death arrived, I submitted to the passage as he signaled me and lured me to his carriage. Mighty black steeds pulled us. The trail became a tunnel; I stared steadfast at the light, hoping energy to funnel. Memories upset me and sharply I felt the pain of each person I had harmed pursuing my own gain. In this tunnel I revisited every moment I’d spent on Earth. Flailing in self-imposed hell, I doubted my life's worth. As we came ever closer to the eternal tunnel’s light, my soul was overcome by a sense of great hope, not fright. When the carriage stopped before a luminescent pearly door, cautiously I disembarked onto a fluffy white floor. It was then that peace engaged my heart and I heard their voices – soft words of those who stood by me regardless of my choices. Turning the knob, I entered the realm where those I’d loved lived on. Although I’d been a sinner and believed the best times were gone, I found that hope and forgiveness waited on the other side. In my heart hymns of angels restored and amplified.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/28/2011 11:06:00 PM
Well, you opened the door to my mind just enough to see into yours dear Carolyn. You express one of lifes great mysteries with such feeling.
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Date: 9/28/2011 1:56:00 AM
You Rock Seafaress!! This is so beautiful; the imagery is captivating. I love the serenityI feel when reading this. Paula will love this, I am sure. I will add this to my "Favs List"! Love and hugs, Audrey
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:09:00 PM
Beautifully crafted piece of inspiration and truth written with great imagery, ending with soft and soothing comfort. Great poem Mrs. Carolyn
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:29:00 AM
Love the positive, loving note in this one. Kind of casts fear aside. Hope you are enjoying your vacation. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/27/2011 7:15:00 AM
Things never are what they seem, Dear Carolyn. They are even BETTER WITH GOD! I thoroughly enjoyed this spiritual ride this morning. A wonderful, powerful, and energizing piece. The ending of this poem is harmonious...the welcome party of heaven will be spectacular. Forgiveness and eternal enlightenment is what comforts me the most. A huge hug to you this morning. I miss chatting with u thru your poetry. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/26/2011 5:33:00 PM
An insightfull write Carolyn, yet none is righteous execept Him alone..i tell you this.! i have your best interests at heart.. God bless you by day and night.!
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Date: 9/26/2011 2:55:00 PM
A glorious apparition, Carolyn! We are all sinners, of course, but thankfully the final judgement will be taken out of our hands...so there is a chance for us all. A powerful write! Hope you are well. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 9/26/2011 2:53:00 PM
~~~Magnificent~~~ Carolyn~~~ Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2011 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful indeed, my friend. When my gran's brother was just about to die - he got TB in Italy, during WW2 - he told her that there was a long tunnel and that he had a long way to go, but he wasn't afraid as their mother was there. It always moves me to think of that : )
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Date: 9/25/2011 11:31:00 PM
Wow, that's a great take on the "opened doors" contest! I really enjoyed the outstanding write especially the last stanza where it keeps me in awe, complete inspirational thoughts!! Awesome work!!
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Date: 9/25/2011 10:02:00 PM
Dear Caroline. This is so beautiful and should be just what she wants to see in her contest. Are you back home? Hope you are feeling better. Love, Joyce
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