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Beyond the Cemetery Gate


Often, I open the cemetery gate to visit mother,
"I took the bus mother, the scenery was lovely;
 I brought you a red rose from my own garden,
     and now I stand weeping."
       "Do not be sad daughter,
        my time was finished;
        you know I suffered,
        now, I know peace."
                          (The birds are twittering.)
       "oh but I miss you so much mother,
            your voice, your touch, your love;"
"We had a wonderful life you and me daughter,
 talking over tea, gardening, going for country drives."
"Oh, yes mother, I remember all that and so much more!"
                           (The leaves are whispering.)
       "It is time daughter to let go,
          do not dwell with the dead;"
"Mother, I wish that I could break this chain of grief,
  so many lay with you beneath the cold earth."
" And we are all at peace, beyond all pain we dwell,"
(weeping) "I must go mother, I will back soon, promise."
                            (A red rose left, disappears.)

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September 5, 2016

Verse

Submitted to the contest, Best Sad Poem Ever II
sponsor, Laura Loo 

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Darling Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 2:57 PM
What a beautifully written expression of raw emotion! Such grief and love! 7! Adding to my favorites!
Warrior Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Congrats!!! on the win Wings...Superbly done my friend...god bless...^WW^
Nusker Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Very well expressed. Love it. Congrats on your win.
Chansarkar Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Can't get sadder than this!Congrats BW!
Scars Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 11:34 AM
Broken Wings...I remember reading this when you entered it, and it should have placed for sure. You bring out a sadness in me when you speak of the heartbreaking loss of your dear mother...Be blessed lovely Broken Wings...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Such an amazing poem ...a favorite
Smith Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Oops.... sorry Constance....I'm on my phone and taking pain meds from my surgery
La France Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:04 PM
you mean Constance, I hope ~ Thanks for visiting ~
Curtis Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 5:16 PM
We are all just beyond the cemetery gate, be it one side or the other----I have no doubt in my soul of souls---we will meet them again---- Thanks for sharing BW
La France Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Jerry, so true, I believe that too ~
Scars Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Oh Broken Wings, so beautifully sad...you are the best :)-luloo oh, good luck :)
La France Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Laura, you know me I can pen a sad one ~
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