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Often, I open the cemetery gate to visit mother, "I took the bus mother, the scenery was lovely; I brought you a red rose from my own garden, and now I stand weeping." "Do not be sad daughter, my time was finished; you know I suffered, now, I know peace." (The birds are twittering.) "oh but I miss you so much mother, your voice, your touch, your love;" "We had a wonderful life you and me daughter, talking over tea, gardening, going for country drives." "Oh, yes mother, I remember all that and so much more!" (The leaves are whispering.) "It is time daughter to let go, do not dwell with the dead;" "Mother, I wish that I could break this chain of grief, so many lay with you beneath the cold earth." " And we are all at peace, beyond all pain we dwell," (weeping) "I must go mother, I will back soon, promise." (A red rose left, disappears.) ___________________________ September 5, 2016 Verse Submitted to the contest, Best Sad Poem Ever II sponsor, Laura Loo Second Place

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Date: 10/5/2016 2:57:00 PM
What a beautifully written expression of raw emotion! Such grief and love! 7! Adding to my favorites!
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Date: 9/13/2016 9:29:00 AM
Congrats!!! on the win Wings...Superbly done my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/12/2016 10:42:00 PM
Very well expressed. Love it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/12/2016 3:14:00 PM
Can't get sadder than this!Congrats BW!
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Date: 9/12/2016 11:34:00 AM
Broken Wings...I remember reading this when you entered it, and it should have placed for sure. You bring out a sadness in me when you speak of the heartbreaking loss of your dear mother...Be blessed lovely Broken Wings...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/5/2016 5:30:00 PM
Such an amazing poem ...a favorite
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/5/2016 6:07:00 PM
Oops.... sorry Constance....I'm on my phone and taking pain meds from my surgery
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2016 6:04:00 PM
you mean Constance, I hope ~ Thanks for visiting ~
Date: 9/5/2016 5:16:00 PM
We are all just beyond the cemetery gate, be it one side or the other----I have no doubt in my soul of souls---we will meet them again---- Thanks for sharing BW
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2016 6:05:00 PM
Jerry, so true, I believe that too ~
Date: 9/5/2016 1:38:00 PM
Oh Broken Wings, so beautifully sad...you are the best :)-luloo oh, good luck :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/5/2016 6:06:00 PM
Laura, you know me I can pen a sad one ~

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