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Beyond the Breakers

Beyond the Breakers Life’s crashing surf rebuked me tossed my tortured being back into the roaring loneliness. Repeatedly I dove into the fury defying the strength of demon gods cursing the frailty of men railing against the invisibility of a sightless future – straining to escape its shore. Wearily I fell victim to the tides drawn limply into foaming eddies that bid me – succumb to the solace of the silence beyond the breakers sink slowly into her arms feel the warming sun fade into the numbing depths of cold abandon. 2/7/2017 submitted to – Beyond the Breakers – Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/13/2017 10:28:00 AM
Powerful write. I like the emotions that emanate, struggling with waves.Congrats :)
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:08:00 PM
Loneliness can feel like drowning...so sad but beautifully written, John. Congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/12/2017 2:17:00 PM
Few things can make life seem more hopeless than the loneliness that follows a broken relationship. Very well written, John. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/12/2017 2:00:00 PM
Great write and win...Congrats
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Date: 2/7/2017 12:37:00 PM
Where's a lifeguard when you need one? Well done John, best wishes in the contest...
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John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2017 2:54:00 PM
thanks Charlie
Date: 2/7/2017 10:26:00 AM
ohh, solid write with a triumphant feel as the lines close... excellent, john!..huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thanks Nette, your input is always appreciated.
Date: 2/7/2017 8:52:00 AM
This felt lonely and very cold my friend. Nice take on the contest theme. I wish you much luck.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2017 2:52:00 PM
Yes, Chris, it took a little slip into the dark side of the breakers

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