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Beyond the Blue

Facing the horizon,its those eyes that I see without watching you Its those those lips that I feel without kissing you Its those arms I behold without your embrace. Thoughts of you flood my heart with all the impossible. On barren sand my lonely footprints but somewhere in a distant land you walk beside me. For Brian Strand's Maximum ten line contest.

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Sandra Haight

Date: 10/19/2016 1:49:00 PM

Very beautiful, Charmaine, but also so sad and melancholy. Such deep emotions you stir with your words! Congratulation on your excellent podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2016 11:53:00 AM

Lovely, Charmaine! Congrats!

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/19/2016 6:47:00 AM

Wow!! Lovely ....reader can feel every word! Congratulations on your win dear Charmaine // love, Anu:)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/27/2016 12:53:00 PM

Thoughts of you flood my heart...just beautiful...in a distant land you walk beside me ...such lovely poetry Charmaine

Daver Austin

Date: 1/19/2015 10:41:00 AM

Good stuff, Charmaine. These would make wonderful tanka also. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/4/2014 2:14:00 PM

So romantic! It's [line 2] only human to long for what we don't have HUGS Light & Love

Edward Orozco

Date: 9/2/2014 6:24:00 PM

Beautiful piece! -Edward =)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/1/2014 5:37:00 PM

Hi Charm! This comes over as lovely, sad, mysterious and hopeful, all in one. Love the hidden meaning that lies in the final two lines. // paul

Moein Jr

Date: 8/1/2014 10:26:00 AM

Dear Charmain,it's mysteriously beautiful! I enjoy reading your poem over & over! Your fan, Moein:)

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 8/1/2014 3:50:00 AM

Beautiful and passionate poem in a few poetic words. You are very gifted dear Charmaine Alofas, Tiaua

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/31/2014 11:12:00 PM

Simply breathtaking, Charmaine!... I love the end, also.. Soulmates, always together somewhere.. Hugs.. Arlene

David Brown

Date: 7/31/2014 5:34:00 PM

'Its those lips that I feel without kissing you'; what a wonderful verse. Very beautiful feel and flow to this, Charmaine. David

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/31/2014 3:09:00 PM

seems as a sad piece of longing and missing someone's loving embrace. Love can be so lonely.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2014 1:02:00 PM

so melodious and romantic.. my heart sighs, charms.. beautiful as always.. huggs

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/31/2014 10:24:00 AM

This is so sweetly written my dear Charmaine! Written as only you can write them! Big loving hugs, Jack XOX

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/31/2014 9:05:00 AM

I enjoyed this. Happy writing and God bless you.

Sidney Beck

Date: 7/31/2014 8:51:00 AM

very nice.....well done

Tim Smith

Date: 7/31/2014 8:45:00 AM

Wonderful Charms...I will have to go listen then read this gem again...... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2014 8:16:00 AM

Charmaine this is stunning! I too get inspiration from hearing wonderful lyrics. Hugs Jan xxx