Charmaine Chircop Poet Free verse

Beyond the Blue

Facing the horizon,its those eyes that I see without watching you

Its those those lips that I feel without kissing you

Its those arms I behold without your embrace.

Thoughts of you flood my heart with all the impossible.

On barren sand my lonely footprints

but somewhere in a distant land you walk beside me.



For Brian Strand's  Maximum ten line contest.

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Sandra Haight October 19, 2016 at 1:49 PM Very beautiful, Charmaine, but also so sad and melancholy. Such deep emotions you stir with your words! Congratulation on your excellent podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues October 19, 2016 at 11:53 AM Lovely, Charmaine! Congrats!

Anu Nayak October 19, 2016 at 6:47 AM Wow!! Lovely ....reader can feel every word! Congratulations on your win dear Charmaine // love, Anu:)

Tim Smith May 27, 2016 at 12:53 PM Thoughts of you flood my heart...just beautiful...in a distant land you walk beside me ...such lovely poetry Charmaine

Daver Austin January 19, 2015 at 10:41 AM Good stuff, Charmaine. These would make wonderful tanka also. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Debbie Guzzi September 4, 2014 at 2:14 PM So romantic! It's [line 2] only human to long for what we don't have HUGS Light & Love

Edward Orozco September 2, 2014 at 6:24 PM Beautiful piece! -Edward =)

Paul Callus August 1, 2014 at 5:37 PM Hi Charm! This comes over as lovely, sad, mysterious and hopeful, all in one. Love the hidden meaning that lies in the final two lines. // paul

Moein Jr August 1, 2014 at 10:26 AM Dear Charmain,it's mysteriously beautiful! I enjoy reading your poem over & over! Your fan, Moein:)

Tiaua M Ioane August 1, 2014 at 3:50 AM Beautiful and passionate poem in a few poetic words. You are very gifted dear Charmaine Alofas, Tiaua

Arlene Smith July 31, 2014 at 11:12 PM Simply breathtaking, Charmaine!... I love the end, also.. Soulmates, always together somewhere.. Hugs.. Arlene

David Brown July 31, 2014 at 5:34 PM 'Its those lips that I feel without kissing you'; what a wonderful verse. Very beautiful feel and flow to this, Charmaine. David

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 31, 2014 at 3:09 PM seems as a sad piece of longing and missing someone's loving embrace. Love can be so lonely.

Nette Onclaud July 31, 2014 at 1:02 PM so melodious and romantic.. my heart sighs, charms.. beautiful as always.. huggs

Jack Ellison July 31, 2014 at 10:24 AM This is so sweetly written my dear Charmaine! Written as only you can write them! Big loving hugs, Jack XOX

Regina Mcintosh July 31, 2014 at 9:05 AM I enjoyed this. Happy writing and God bless you.

Sidney Beck July 31, 2014 at 8:51 AM very nice.....well done

Tim Smith July 31, 2014 at 8:45 AM Wonderful Charms...I will have to go listen then read this gem again...... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison July 31, 2014 at 8:16 AM Charmaine this is stunning! I too get inspiration from hearing wonderful lyrics. Hugs Jan xxx