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Beyond Ours

Our person; our weapon Our love; our hope Our partner; our friend Our home; our sanctity. Our garden wall; our security. Our family: our identity. Our children; our future. Our culture: our guideline. Our religion; our belonging. Our country; our pride What is beyond this invisible wall around? A world to know, understand and respect. A choice; the goldfish in a small glass aquarium, in the ocean Or the fish in the vastness and depth of the ocean?

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Gary Bateman

Date: 8/2/2017 3:00:00 PM

Hello Sunita, A very interesting Didactic here for sure. I really like questions you pose at the end. The fish in the vastness and depth of the ocean would be my choice. (This is probably the scary choice.) Enjoyed this one!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/3/2017 8:51:00 AM

Your choice does not surprise me. of course an enlightened person ventures... and dares. Somebody said to me "if one says bad things about your identity (whatever) and you get angry on the point of destroying then you have yet to grow up and grow above it. Thanks for enlightening me with your most reflective comment friend. All the best. :) Sunita

Niall Fulham

Date: 8/1/2017 1:39:00 PM

Hi Sunita , very well penned , I enjoyed reading :))))hugs

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/2/2017 10:27:00 AM

Thanks friend for the visit and appreciation. GL Sunita :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/1/2017 11:43:00 AM

Perspective indeed :) lovely write Sunita xomo!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/1/2017 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Maureen for the appreciation and the visit. Regs Sunita :)