Beyond My Reach

get the ladder
there are cobwebs in the corners
just beyond my reach


Written for the Cobwebs and Dust Contest
Theme: cobwebs and dust
Date written 03/12/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Yamin Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 3:07 PM
A beautiful Haiku on cobweb, Ann. I wish you a win in the competition. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem The Unmarked Grave . Generally,what you have presumed doesn't happen in the Eastern hemisphere. But in cases where it happens it is due to poverty. Some people can't afford the cost of building even a simple grave with tomb stone. My case was different. It is a story of apathy of people who had money. That is what hurts me. -Mohammad
Massop Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Love the visual image this creates.
Austin Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 2:18 PM
Perfectly describes my entire house ceilings. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Wery good Ann :) ! Good luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise
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