Beyond Milky Way

Beyond Milky Way
another galaxy waits....
an invitation

heavenly new path
leading to purple pleasure....
we will be alien


© kashinath karmakar
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By:kashinath karmakar (24th March 2011,photo based)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 1:31 PM
thankxx Kash for your encouraging words on my contest entries luv.. good luck to u also .. always wonderful to read your comments my friend...luv..
Neels Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 12:29 PM
I plan on going with you beyond Milky Way Kash hehe.. enjoyed this especially your ending.. ;)
Devonshire Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Soup mail returned, Kash.
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March 29, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Soup mail in a moment, Kashinath. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 7:39 AM
Wishing u a happy weekend Kashinath .. hope all is well luv..
Fraser Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 12:48 PM
We sure will be Kashinath, and I wish I could be there for that moment. The travelling party will need an intellegent being, that's me. Have a great weekend....:)
Horsman Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 6:48 AM
beautiful imagery kashinath, hope this is for the contest. good luck. Hary
Mehta Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Beautifully read of the picture in the contest and equally worded, kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Hey, you made this quite unique, Kashinath, by adding the purple pleasure and the alien part! So nice!
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March 24, 2011 at 1:04 PM
compelling read, kashi... whooty winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 10:42 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Kashinath. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Oh, I love the last line. Indeed, if we visit other planets, we will be the aliens. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Fantastic .. your words are mellow dramatic in the loveliest sense Kashinath.. a portrait painted in words beyond Milky Way ..good luck in the contest luv.. oh that Diamante form is grand.. may use it for future contests luv..
Richards Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Indeed, we have imagined aliens....and yet, we never think of them as being "us"...a new concept,.......well done, Kashinath!
Fillmore Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 7:41 AM
This is an excellent one, Kasthinath:) like that you've expressed that it is a vast unknown up there... Best of luck in the contest! Carol
Kendrick Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Good one about the unknow that is out there...Reads like winning material..Sara
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 5:57 AM
Hope one day we will visit that purple galaxy---kashinath
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