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Beyond Milky Way

Beyond Milky Way
another galaxy waits....
an invitation

heavenly new path
leading to purple pleasure....
we will be alien


© kashinath karmakar
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By:kashinath karmakar (24th March 2011,photo based)

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/29/2011 1:31:00 PM

thankxx Kash for your encouraging words on my contest entries luv.. good luck to u also .. always wonderful to read your comments my friend...luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/29/2011 12:29:00 PM

I plan on going with you beyond Milky Way Kash hehe.. enjoyed this especially your ending.. ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2011 10:24:00 AM

Soup mail returned, Kash.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2011 9:33:00 AM

Soup mail in a moment, Kashinath. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2011 7:39:00 AM

Wishing u a happy weekend Kashinath .. hope all is well luv..

James Fraser

Date: 3/25/2011 12:48:00 PM

We sure will be Kashinath, and I wish I could be there for that moment. The travelling party will need an intellegent being, that's me. Have a great weekend....:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/25/2011 6:48:00 AM

beautiful imagery kashinath, hope this is for the contest. good luck. Hary

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/24/2011 3:39:00 PM

Beautifully read of the picture in the contest and equally worded, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2011 2:17:00 PM

Hey, you made this quite unique, Kashinath, by adding the purple pleasure and the alien part! So nice!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2011 1:04:00 PM

compelling read, kashi... whooty winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 10:42:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Kashinath. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2011 8:56:00 AM

Oh, I love the last line. Indeed, if we visit other planets, we will be the aliens. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 8:22:00 AM

Fantastic .. your words are mellow dramatic in the loveliest sense Kashinath.. a portrait painted in words beyond Milky Way ..good luck in the contest luv.. oh that Diamante form is grand.. may use it for future contests luv..