Beyond Horizon Plus

Beyond horizon what do you think there be?
Beautiful women scantily clad, dancing to the beat of a drum.
Make you smile, twinkle in your eye. Countless fireflies light
up the night, above a crystal clear sea; Easy on your mind,
want to do this all the time. Time to move on kicked in overdrive,
skipped over Pacific to a desert isle. Silver sand beach, water aqua
marine, palm trees and date trees to eat from much to my delight.
Looked down the beach got such a fright head hunters running
straight at me! I ran the other direction crankin up more speed, 
watch out hyperdrive! Dazzling color, red, blue, purple, violet. Landed on
a planet at first thought was Earth. Sun scarlet, stars orange and green,
horizon purple strange scene. Over in some trees I saw a female chimpanzie,
threads to the max. Victorias secret with designer boots, oh man what 
a hoot. She looked at me with a twinkle in her big brown eyes, she jumped
three hundred feet and hugged my left knee. She started doing the love
dance and moaned, come on baby give me all you got. I gave it a thought,
then decided not! Gettin out of here this scene is too far out for me! back
to speed of light thinkin to myself, wonder where I'll land this time;
Guess I'll find out when I reach the other side. Beyond purple horizon
what else do you think there be?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/9/2011 6:38:00 PM
So much color for the mind to absorb, am enjoying thrip through your verse.
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/10/2011 12:47:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Elizabeth for your kind comments, much appreciated......with love.......old Jack
Date: 8/31/2011 5:40:00 PM
Hmmmmm I think you been sittin' in the sun looking at the water and sipping Pina coladas all day and day dreaming my friend. Why not. It's summer. God Bless, JB
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/31/2011 6:54:00 PM
lol, would love that if it were true, no just over cranking my imagination sittiing here at home alone, no pina coladas here either lol...thanks for your kind comments lovely Lady Judy, much appreciated...with love..old Jack
Date: 8/26/2011 6:29:00 AM
There are some very creative sights "Beyond (your) Horizon, Jack. I might not be up to meeting the chip wwearing Vitoria's Secret (and designer boots) but it gave me a huckle. Earlier in the poem, I enjoying the images of ladies dancing, firefles and the crystal seas. I would have been runnning away from the head hunters too!. Love, "old Carolyn"
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/31/2011 6:59:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Carolyn for your kind comments, much appreiated ...with love...old Jack, I wasn't up for meeting the chimp either, lol and right on cannibals head hunters give me the wolly buggers if you know what I mean.
Date: 8/25/2011 11:53:00 PM
any plus is a good plus Jack.. and this poem is especially good with or without plus in title .. excellent and entertaining my friend...
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/26/2011 12:40:00 AM
Thank you very much lovely Lady Linda Marie for your kind comments, much appreciated.....with love.....old Jack
Date: 8/25/2011 8:21:00 PM
Wow....you really painted a vivid picture Jack....so beautiful...thanks for sharing...smiles Chiquita
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/26/2011 12:41:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Chiquita for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Date: 8/25/2011 7:15:00 PM
Wild imagination in this work that is creative and descriptive..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/26/2011 12:43:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady Sara for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
Date: 8/25/2011 12:06:00 AM
yoyoyo,,, many words sophisticated and subtle.. thanks for being, old jack.
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/25/2011 6:53:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Nancy for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Date: 8/23/2011 10:31:00 PM
vivid composition Jack and very intriguing lines to invite the reader to ponder these ideas and thoughts u penned luv.. so very well presented.. I often wonder what is beyond the sky and know streets of gold there lie..luv.. and maybe some hunky guys too..haha..
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/24/2011 3:52:00 AM
Thank you lovely Lady for your kind comments much appreciate....with love...old Jack....love those streets of gold, not so sure about hunky guys....lol
Date: 8/23/2011 10:19:00 PM
Wow...you really had me watching this like a movie!! Wow!!! Fun reading!!!
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/24/2011 3:53:00 AM
Thank you lovely lady Carrie for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
Date: 8/23/2011 6:54:00 AM
with this vivid poetic landscape , i am totally blown away, jack... hmmm, victoria's secret! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/23/2011 4:45:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady nette for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack...lol if I can't get a woman may have to settle for the chimpanze!
Date: 8/23/2011 3:32:00 AM
interesting little trip of mind, flying through space and time, beyond the purple horizon, without a realizing, be... good on ya cobber...
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 8/23/2011 4:48:00 PM
Thank you mate Don sir for your kind comments, much appreciated, inspired by your poem on the Aussie dog fight with the JU88's, next time around you and Paul are going to be rescuing me with your ship!...with love...old Jack cobber...lol
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