Beyond Gloom of Grey

BEYOND GLOOM OF GREY
A time came unheralded in my life when Writhing in the crushing clutches of suffering My heart broke and bled in pining pain Found no comforting arms near to cling. I took a plunge in the dense and dark sea of agony Tried to swim across to the calming shore not in sight Someone from within told me to try detached and see Hope rise like sun in the day that dawns after the night. My broken heart morphed into a bird, grew wing And flew in freedom over the hill and far away To a garden of rose blooming in the sparkle of spring Under the azure sky emerging from the gloom of grey. In ethereal scented solitude I sensed in my core The essence of my soul opening the petals of peace Tranquil ecstasy then started to cascade and pour In my serene mind the florid shower of bliss. Let the broken heart get the wings, fly free Flowers in the debris of despair you’ll see.
May 22, 2018 Theme : Over the hill and far away Contest : Let Your Pen Drip Sponsored by : Broken Wings

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Date: 9/9/2018 10:32:00 AM
Beautiful metaphors in your sad but uplifting poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your podium placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/12/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 6/14/2018 4:31:00 AM
Back to congratulate you again for your wonderful win!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/14/2018 11:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan.
Date: 6/5/2018 9:24:00 PM
Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/6/2018 12:00:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 5/24/2018 2:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance for your encouragement by placing the poem and for your comments.
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Date: 5/23/2018 10:36:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome write, well done ~
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/24/2018 2:35:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. Sorry, the above was meant to be reply to your comments. This may be read as such.
Date: 5/22/2018 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Enjoyed.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/23/2018 1:56:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 5/22/2018 6:33:00 AM
Very inspiring Subimal. Beautifully written for the contest :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/23/2018 1:56:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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