~beyond Equinox~

Golden tresses shorn
lay beneath the feet of summers passing,
sun shifts slowly towards warmth
of another horizon,

promising to return,

and we are wrapped for winters blues
beneath compressing sky,
as it drains away all colours.

We were tired as we
lay beneath the feet of summers passing,
too many attempts to fly
left our breath 
promising to return.

How lethargic morning seems
as it lingers longer in slumber
beneath compressing sky,
with no thought to lights insistence
that night should be on its way.

Too many attempts to fly
left clouds resting against mountains,
dulling their sharpness 
into a soft subtle melody,
while the wolf’s moon
called for the chorus to mourn
golden tresses shorn,

soon frost will bleach all temporary white
and as it drains away all colours,
we reminisce on how we
lay beneath the feet of summers passing,

promising to return.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 3, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Colin. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2010 at 4:31 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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May 19, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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May 18, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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May 17, 2010 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Colin. Love, Carol
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May 16, 2010 at 10:45 PM
Wow, this is really great! A gem!
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May 16, 2010 at 12:27 PM
BEAUTIFUL WRITE, ENJOYED THIS READ AND I WOULD ALSO LIKE TO ADD AND SAY BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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