Beyond Despair

Beyond Despair

     
                 despair 
          heavy, discordant
    stomping, injuring, impeding
  stamina, outlook, impulse, dreams
    refreshing, aiding, inspiriting
          priceless, heartfelt
                    hope
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Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Yes, there is always hope, but sometimes it is not easy to find. I can't imagine the despair that the people who have been touched by either hurricane, flooding, tornadoes or maybe even all three here lately must be feeling but there is still hope for them in some form. Thanks for sharing this timely one with us. Sara K
Proxenos Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 1:14 PM
How are you Sally we seem to have got lost for a while, but I've missed you and your lovely poetry and this Diamante is no exception. Well penned Sally and really creative.. Blessings Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 3:22 PM
We must look for the hope!
Beaufort Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Hi Sally, I'm viewing this as a transition from D.T. to K.H. and smiling internally. Hopefully, you are good and feeling hopeful despite the trials life presents. I am thinking of you and hoping you are well. Your poems touch my heart, and I hope you do know that! Many Tys.
Bayles Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 4:47 PM
This is a nice mirror poem, where there's a first half, a middle line, and a second half. The second half is opposite of the first half, mirroring it. The middle line is where the change occurs. Mark Lathrop is the inventor of this form.
Rolland Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 6:23 AM
this ends well, life is a fight, i never forget well written
Poet Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Wonderful poem, Sally's "Beyond Despair" revolves around the contrast between the weight of despair and the uplifting power of hope.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 11:07 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful  Diamante write.  Have Blessed day writing away..........
blegh Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 12:56 PM
A fav
Gasun Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 7:03 AM
A shining inspirational diamante poem you've lovingly shared to us my dearest poet friend Sally. I love it a lot. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
Vaso Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:36 AM
You ave expressed so much in few words!
Rodgers Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 12:43 PM
Dear Sally, I always loved the diamanté style and you have mastered the approach showing a range of emotions. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Rose  Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 11:16 AM
You still have the emotions of poetic endeavors in you alive and well. So nice to read your poetry once again dear Sally
Buhagiar Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Life is full of ups and downs. Excellent transition from despair to hope. Brilliant poem.
DiMino Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Sometimes very difficult to see through the gloom. I recall 40 years of (almost total gloom), everyday an awake nightmare. Your lovely poem imparts, brave strength and faithful endurance. A blessing. Thank you for sharing such light.
Empress Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 12:29 PM
Dear sally, so good to see you post today, i hope you are doing well, this is a beautiful diamente so well written and delivered! I love how youv used the antonyms despair and hope, fits and flows well in this! Sending you light today and always
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