Beyond Day

Pure black night falls deep.
 Crickets whisper tales of day,
  moon comes out to play.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Sheer delight to read >> James
K. Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:11 AM
this is really a soothing haiku, very fitting about a peaceful evening, enjoyed this very much Gareth :)
Shango Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 5:30 AM
This is a great masterpiece ... the images and mythos leaped from the page like profoundness in simplicity. One love
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 5:18 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Gareth. Wishing you a week full of love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 6:05 PM
Great images in this write...I can see and hear the scene...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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April 5, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Beautiful image, nice work on the 5/7/5...Raul
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