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Beyond the Clouds

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I want to break free - from this confining shell that my soul inhabits, warmed by the sun, cooled by winds beyond the clouds and soaring Revised for the One Nature Tanka - Inspired By My Short Poem Posted On Contest Page of Rick Parise

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Probir Gupta

Date: 8/8/2016 6:11:00 AM

Lovely poem ... Congratulations on your win Andrea ...

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 8:52:00 AM

I feel that this poem is very loyal to Rick's own nature poem, Andrea, even though it was originally written prior to this contest. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Michael Dom

Date: 8/5/2016 11:15:00 PM

inspired.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/5/2016 7:30:00 AM

Great interpretation of the inspiration, congratulations Andrea...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/5/2016 12:37:00 AM

Lovely one, Andrea:) Congratulations on your win:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/4/2016 10:58:00 PM

Hi Andrea, It is so lovely and free. Let's soar high in the sky. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/4/2016 10:29:00 PM

Lovely, Andrea, and I felt the soaring freedom beyond the clouds in your words. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Tom Arnone

Date: 8/4/2016 7:21:00 PM

Don't rush it, Andrea. Stay in your shell for a while. Placement congrats! ;-)

Joseph May

Date: 8/4/2016 6:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea...

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/4/2016 5:49:00 PM

Very pretty, Andrea! Congrats on your win :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/4/2016 5:37:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats - glad you chose an oldie too - I don't feel so lazy now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 8/4/2016 4:40:00 PM

Andrea, lovely tanka lady :) congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Tim Smith

Date: 8/4/2016 4:36:00 PM

Had to come see what one you chose. It does go right along with the poem.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2015 12:05:00 AM

Exquisite write Andrea n such a wonderful pic! Congrats on great win!

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/26/2015 4:39:00 PM

I really loved this great poem, Andrea! Loved the spirit of it, a 7 from me and congrats :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/25/2015 6:58:00 PM

well described Andrea love it hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2015 3:26:00 PM

This is the way I felt when looking out the aircraft windows for so many years and still feel everytime I fly. A connection beyond the clouds. Loved this poem as I said. Congrats on you win my friend! Hugs, Connie