Beyond

beyond the path of lily leaves, there lies a world I wish to see - a land of peace, where no one grieves.. Of nature, with lavish beauty

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/14/2015 11:38:00 AM

More than just words and greatly significant lines for a wonderful day as this. I am happy to stop by. Great write and keep it up because I will still come knocking at the door of your wonderful pages.

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/14/2015 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so much!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/12/2015 8:29:00 PM

Perfect! Good for you, nicely done!

Florin Andronic

Date: 3/31/2015 11:05:00 PM

nice thought

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/14/2015 12:11:00 PM

Thanks!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/12/2015 8:49:00 AM

aww that is good!!! :)

Sneha Rv
Date: 3/12/2015 9:58:00 AM

Thanks a lot, dear Casarah!!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/12/2015 8:22:00 AM

simply stunning Sneha - good luck in the contest - this will do well for you ! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 3/12/2015 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much!!