Bewitched

Bright light shone across painted skies above… It is a fairy tale—is it not? Cherished by your touch… Lavished with your kisses made by captured butterflies… Filled with vigor your soft lips find mine… You have bewitched me with your love… Under this passionate spell I cannot go back… but do I want to?

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/1/2015 10:43:00 AM

Nice!

Meg Anderson
Date: 1/1/2015 12:39:00 PM

Thank you.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 12/19/2014 7:16:00 AM

A lovely heart-felt piece, Meg! I'm glad I'd read further than your last comment, or I might have called you 'kim'.:) Ouf, I'd done that here more than once. Six days until Christmas...sighhh..I should be commenting only after I've finished writing out my cards and made the cookies I've promised. Loved this write, puts me in a good mood to do my stuff! Thank you! Mikki

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/19/2014 7:19:00 AM

Mikki, awe your welcome. Thank you! I was filled with love when I wrote this. Meg

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/11/2014 5:57:00 PM

very beautifully painted piece kim

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/11/2014 6:05:00 PM

Liam, I do forgive you this time. Only because I love the name love Liam. Lol thank you for reading.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/11/2014 5:59:00 PM

sorry i meant meg do forgive me my mistake

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/9/2014 10:15:00 PM

I am not here as often as I wish, but dont worry, sooner or later I get around to reading all the nice poets here!!

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/10/2014 5:02:00 AM

Awe thank you for reading then.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/9/2014 9:47:00 PM

Loved the ending, very sweet!

Meg Anderson
Date: 12/9/2014 9:54:00 PM

Awe thank you Arthur, I was wondering when you would come and read more of my poems. Yes this one just popped in my mind and I had to let out be free. Meg