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Two profound faint clouds approach the skyline. Not close as seethed by the others close by. The two siblings quarrel and risk the whine. Out of a meek pace to a haunting tone. Thunderstorms and mild rain are on the way. Two profound faint clouds approach the skyline. To the north, clouds reflect sun's beams in red groan. The newly found gold adds amber outlay. The two siblings quarrel and risk the whine. As dusk nears, sky is a bustling gloom zone. Dusk hits clouds cluster and shapes angel lay. Two profound faint clouds approach the skyline. The Lord has given me chance to opine   If you could just sit close and view the way. The two siblings quarrel and risk the whine. It's not daily that the weather is fine. We could view Salish Seas over Eagle's den. Two profound faint clouds approach the skyline. The two siblings quarrel and risk the whine.
Written: December 13, 2021

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Date: 12/14/2021 6:23:00 AM
I have long stopped writing villanelle. A lovely poem.
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:11:00 AM
What a marvelous Villanelle, my friend, Lasaad! A joy to read. Blessings.
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Date: 12/13/2021 5:51:00 PM
Well written Villanelle, Lasaad. I like the form, the repeating lines throughout is very interesing with the differing senarios. Blessings my friend, Bill
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