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Beware of the Thorn

~ Tonight I bare my folly to the moon O’ moon, you saw the ways the devil woos How roses swoon to songs so out of tune But hearts refuse to see the naked truth A bloom that seeks the sun to feel the glow For gentle touch and whispers from the breeze Instead of sonnets sung with warming breath His mirth has had his laugh, and left with ease I trace the choices made…each withered shard Love strove to use me up, and follow scorn I stand alone, stripped bare of self regard As petals fell away, stripped down to thorns Love’s fragrance steals my breath, against my will Made captive by a heart who seeks it still
~ Lost Love Sonnet For Francine's Contest: By Carrie Richards 1/20/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/27/2012 4:35:00 PM
Another great write. Legend says the Rose was soo beautiful, God put thorns on the stems to protect it.
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:44:00 PM
Hey we both did sonnets with mention to the moon!! In the same contest and with theme of lost love. How cool is that. CArrie you did a magnificent sonnet, proving you are quite versatile as a poet who also excels in free verse!
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:06:00 AM
A beautifully written Sonnet my friend. The flow easily across the page and the imagery is great. Lots of feeling in the words. A fine job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/21/2012 9:44:00 PM
nice..good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/21/2012 7:55:00 PM
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