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Beware of Such Folk

I used to be a dreamer until I fell for a dream crusher I used to be very optimistic until I met miss negative I used to have beautiful wings until I ran into a shearer I used to be a lovely garden until someone planted weeds I used to see vibrant colors until I came across mr.dull Beware of such folk. They bring destruction, everywhere they go. 2-27-2020 Alexis Y. Inspired by the “Warning” contest

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Date: 3/1/2020 9:41:00 PM
I like it's off-the-wall yet direct-on message 'feel', if that makes sense and hope it does because it is my truth. This has an edgy attitude that leaped with confidence and won me over! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/1/2020 3:54:00 PM
Reminiscent of Andy Williams' 1964 hit 'Moon River:' "You dream-maker, you heart-breaker,..." Nicely penned, Alexis! :) Gershon
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Date: 2/29/2020 12:09:00 PM
Too many dreammakers heartbreakers in this world...
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Date: 2/28/2020 7:42:00 PM
this is fantastic, Alexis. And here I just whined about myself in a soupmail, making me a cross between Mr. Dull and Miss negative. I like this one so much, I am going to FAVE it.
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Date: 2/28/2020 5:19:00 AM
Oh how very true this is. Made me think of the saying misery loves company ... as they like to bring others down. Good write with great advice ... have a great day Alexis :) hugs
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Date: 2/27/2020 1:06:00 PM
I love it so clever. hope you won. Take care. Pete.
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Date: 2/27/2020 11:50:00 AM
- The truth is in the last verse, Alexis .... great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2020 10:06:00 AM
They bring destruction for sure--great write for the contest theme, Alexis--all the best.
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