Beata Agustin Poet Rhyme

Beware of Hell

Hell is a place of eternal torture
With restlessness’ angst and despair-puncture
Sealing the faithless in their doomed future
Midst cruel hatred’s defiant gesture.

Hell is a prison of endless darkness
Where misery’s gloom prevails in blackness
Due to sufferings, despair, hopelessness
Leaving the convicts in their guilt’s fierceness.

Hell* is a cell of everlasting torment
Expressing death's wailing every moment
As sorrows, anguish, woe wildly lament
With constant gnashing of teeth engagement.

Hell is a dungeon where there’s no exit
And each one slides toward bottomless pit
Struggling to reach foot stool summit
Yet never to taste freedom’s air a bit.

Hell is lake of fire** where God’s wrath abides
Unreached by His mercy, while His grace hides
There, worms die not, with pleas’ screams at all sides
Along unheard prayers … deserving chides.

Hell awaits everyone who’s a sinner
Bearing “You’re forever condemned” banner
No one can flee from punishment runner
While Satan and cohorts serve cursed dinner.

Hell can be missed by trusting the great Lord
In placing faith in God upon His Word
He vanquished hell’s might with His divine sword
For those who are in Christ in sweet accord.

Hell is indeed closed to the redeemed soul
Assured by the Almighty's loving goal
Granting eternal life**, forever whole
Through Jesus Christ in His great Saviour's role.
 
*Luke16:23And in hell he lift up his eyes, being in torments...

**Revelation 20:14 - And death and hell were cast into the lake of fire. This is the second death.  Revelation 21:8 - But the fearful, and unbelieving, and the abominable, and murderers, and whoremongers, and sorcerers, and idolaters, and all liars, shall have their part in the lake which burneth with fire and brimstone: which is the second death.

***Romans 6:23 For the wages of sin is death; but the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord.

October 5, 2018
Edited on March 5, 2023
2nd place,	"Hell" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest
Sponsored by Robert James Liguori; judged on 3/10/2023.

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Len Gasun March 11, 2023 at 12:58 AM An outstanding poem my dear friend Beata. Hell can be missed and be avoided and all is expressed very well in your two ending stanzas while romans 6: 23 gives us the perfect assurance for those who believe and follow him will receive the gift of God which is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord. Thanks for sharing. Loving this poem and all your poems as always. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always, your family and your golden grace-filled pen. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler March 10, 2023 at 5:25 PM A bleak existence best avoided! Congratulations on your win Beata! :)

Paula Goldsmith March 10, 2023 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................

Margarita Lillico March 10, 2023 at 9:13 AM I’m amazed at your consistent divine connotation of any given theme, your rhymes are interesting, original and full of depth! Great gifted pen! Congratulations!!!