Beware

I came in to your apartment entrance
In someone's clothes to celebrate a happy
Circumstance.
Even though you didn't finance
This reliance
There was complaisance
No definance
Because of your continuance
I soon had dominance.
When you didn't have me you showed petulance
And discordance.
You had no chance
Of deliverance
From the death dance.
Gone from your face is the radiance
Of life as the ambulance
Team loaded up your body with no utterance.
You sent a message loud and clear as life 
Goes on that there are people who will always
Want to enhance
And advance
Their life for an empty significant extravagance.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:17:00 PM

gosh, this sounds like something went very awry!! by the way, happy Galentine's Day, Bette!

Bette Bavington
Date: 2/20/2019 5:02:00 PM

I hope you had a great Valentine's Day. I wrote this poem to show that some people start taking drugs with their friends thinking there is nothing wrong with it. Then they are hooked. It is horrible to watch family and friends trying to get off drugs. The sad part is a lot are dying. They just can't over come. My heart grieves for their families. I have a daughter who has over come drugs. I am thankful to the good Lord. I have a daughter I lost to drugs which has changed me. I have a son who is trying to over come drugs. There are so many more people. I hope this reminds them that there is no reason to take anything that is going to put a monkey on your back.