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Bevi Ko Dosto Ki Sawari Bana K Dekh

Lory ko phudyon ka bhikari bana k dekh ya dugdugi baja k madari bana k dekh Rahi badi ajeen c lazzat tu paye ga Bevi ko dosto ki sawari bana k dekh Incest Urdu Poetry By Aftab Rahi ???? ?? ?????? ?? ?????? ??? ?? ???? ?? ?????? ??? ?? ????? ??? ?? ???? ???? ??? ???? ?? ??? ?? ???? ?? ???? ?? ?????? ?? ????? ??? ?? ???? ?????? ??????? ???? ?????? ???? ?? ????

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/4/2019 1:18:00 AM

Dear Aftab, Even though, I do not understand your poem, the type of poem you selected is NOT Qasida. “Qasida” follows all the rules and system of rhymes of Ghazal, but it is much longer (from 15 to 60 couplets even more), The rhyming of Qasida is like Ghazal AA-BA-CA-DA-EA-FA- GA-HA... and like Ghazal, it could be with and without refrain...

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 1/19/2019 12:48:00 PM

Um,what can I really say, don't you think that it is a little inappropriate, anyways, I wish a very warm welcome here on poetrysoup, I am sure that you will enjoy your stay here and perhaps if you can translate this poem into english, more people will be able to understand it, good luck and have a nice day