Beverage

I’d rather rhyme and meter my dreams,
But you like your verse jagged and plainly-built.
I’ll try it loose and anti-styled, formless as pooled tears
In maudlin drops...drink them!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Caliri Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 11:52 PM
Well done! would never wanna drink it but well done!
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Interesting droplets that you have presented here. Keep the drops flowing for us. Sara
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