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Between Two Rocks

Two solid rocks stand tall and firm With a sunset soon around the bend Upper sky the bluest of rays Being between two rocks, sun displays Grey and blue stone welts in the sky Where pink clouds bond with the water dry Yellow near the surface, eye-line Sunset begins with a wry divine Open the space, I see the end Below is the feel of heartfelt lend Red and gold enfold together Nothing is better than this weather Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/16/2014 11:43:00 PM
You describe a beautiful scene that many will be envious of. Well done, may we all get to see many sunsets, as memorable as this.
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:40:00 AM
The wine gets better as time passes. You and your poetry were missed my friend! Beautiful to see you back even for a while! Exceptional images that one easily could depict after such a splendid description, dear Russell!
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:10:00 AM
Russell, so glad to see you back dear friend, with this splendidly mesmerizing piece... love the wonderful feel of the weather!.. huggs
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:54:00 AM
visions of utter loveliness flood the senses Russel a divine pen hugs 7
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Date: 12/16/2014 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful images in vivid color, Russell! I'm happy to read your poetry on Soup today and to receive your very kind comments, too! I'm glad you liked my poem and it means so much to me that you read it to your wife. Thank you for your encouragement. I hope you'll be around more often. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/15/2014 3:24:00 PM
a lovely landscape described, Russell. at first when I read your title, I thought this was going to be a philosophical poem about being between a rock and a hard place!!
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Date: 12/15/2014 1:24:00 PM
I enjoyed your beautiful sunset poem. gorgeous images
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