Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

- Between Two Heartbeat -

Comfort me with the beauty of flowers
where the sunlight beams dance warmly supreme

Devoid of any tears, cruelty or violence
a veil falls away opening petals kiss deeply surrendering

Seasoned between the vertical light and darker clouds
it becomes hard to breathe in your shade breathless sighs 

Love does not change even if the earth is frozen over
but as you melt into the mind sweet honey dew springs 

This night is all souls night, you can not fail to feel it
residing inside the eyes fountain of forever youth 

For the glance of one gentle heart, she will be your bride
radiating warm flames glow anointing preciously the union

To share along the way, feathers from Heaven every day
touching gently the softest satin holds you an angel always divine 





A Collaborated Poem 05.12.2015
Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid :)
(Unrymed Couplet )

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James Inman February 9, 2016 at 7:50 AM Lovely, lovely piece. Anne-Lise Andresen February 9, 2016 at 8:16 AM - Thanks for your comments and your visit, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelli White December 30, 2015 at 10:38 AM Beautiful Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2015 at 11:47 AM - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Kelli :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama December 22, 2015 at 8:00 AM your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7. Anne-Lise Andresen December 22, 2015 at 11:12 AM - Funom, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort December 19, 2015 at 6:49 AM When you talk of this kind of love and beauty, it is pleasing to see that it's a collaboration. Just a perfect match that reinforces the subject. It's something special. How does magic like that even happen? It just overwhelms me to think of the symmetry in something like this and how you do it. Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2015 at 7:22 AM - It's true ..... there is something special ...... it's magic ...... could not write such poems unless we were in the same "planet" :)))) - Thank you for the beautiful words, Duke :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Renee Dawson December 14, 2015 at 11:42 PM A smoothly written comforting piece. Anne-Lise Andresen December 15, 2015 at 3:36 AM - J.R, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein December 14, 2015 at 11:09 AM Congrats on ur wining my dear Anne lise u surly deserve it... I'm captured by this one truly a breath taking master piece... Always feeling pleasure reading 4 u 2... Hugs :D dalia Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2015 at 12:25 PM - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman December 12, 2015 at 9:28 AM Lovely, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2015 at 12:18 PM - James, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid December 9, 2015 at 5:03 PM congratulations anne lise on poem of the day and for the pleasure of joining pens wishing you a blessed day pal Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2015 at 2:23 AM - I share this honor with you, dear friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 8, 2015 at 9:04 AM Beautiful! A seamless collaboration. Well done, Anne Lise & Liam! Congrats on POTD. Regards // paul Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2015 at 11:50 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 8, 2015 at 6:09 AM Anne Lise and Liam, just beautiful and endearing.. soothing and the imagery is lingering!~Olive Eloisa =`) Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2015 at 11:50 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and comments, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Waweru Ngugi December 7, 2015 at 11:17 PM wow! a very beautiful piece Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2015 at 3:12 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and comments, Waweru :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux December 7, 2015 at 8:39 PM Way to go! Great choice for POTD. Congrats to you both. Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2015 at 3:11 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper December 7, 2015 at 7:16 PM Beautiful , Anne-Lise & Liam, congratulations on poem of the day! Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2015 at 3:11 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 7, 2015 at 6:23 PM Beautiful...simply beautiful! Congrats to both of you! Hugs, Rhonda Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2015 at 3:11 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judy Konos December 7, 2015 at 3:39 PM Congratulations Anne Lise and Liam on your Poem of the Day..... Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2015 at 3:10 AM - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight December 7, 2015 at 2:48 PM So lovely, Anne-Lise and Liam. A heartfelt congratulations on your Poem of the Day honor! Hugs, Sandra Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 2:58 PM - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne December 7, 2015 at 12:03 PM Congratulations on this awesome piece being picked as the poem of the day! Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 12:29 PM - And .... thank you for congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne December 7, 2015 at 12:02 PM Gorgeous! Simply gorgeous! Straight to my faves. Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 12:27 PM - Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words + FAV!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter December 7, 2015 at 9:31 AM Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!I' m so very happy for you both.Well done!Just awesome!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 12:26 PM - I'm so very happy, me too ..... and I think Liam as well :))) - Thank you for the beautiful words and congrats, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance December 7, 2015 at 8:08 AM Another great collaboration! :) Grats on poem of the day Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 8:46 AM - Casarah glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane December 7, 2015 at 6:07 AM This is lovely... congratulations to both of you. ~ Lin ~ Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 6:13 AM - Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words and congrats Lin - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM Anne-Lise and Liam a wonderful collaboration. Enjoyed! Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 6:04 AM - Michael, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman December 6, 2015 at 12:52 PM Dear Anne-Lise and Liam . . . A brilliant collaboration of efforts on this wonderfully rendered Unrhymed Couplet. Written with warm passion, deep feeling, and true radiance. Superb!! TR/FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 6:12 AM ..... Yes, warm words from our hearts, Gary - Glad you enjoy it, thank you for the beautiful words + TR/FAV!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 6, 2015 at 12:35 PM both of you can publish a collab book... i am amazed by the wonder of affection with heavenly touches, anne... a sunday's best!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 6:09 AM - No good business making poetry book in Norway, Nette - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison December 6, 2015 at 11:58 AM Anne Lise and Liam your pens flow golden words - absolutely delightful couplets:-) hugs Jan xx7 Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2015 at 6:06 AM - Jan, many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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