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Between Here and Eternity, Sotto Poet, 9/29/2026

Between Here and Eternity

Braving the lay of time and space, the joy,
And suffering - the flesh in throes of pain
Or highs. Lowing on floor or riding springs.
Between the sheets, we sense darkness and light.

Ebonic plague, a question forms, dare ask…
In sickness haste, we know we cannot last.
Then God appears in chiaroscuro;
In feint and faint, we blink out S O S.

What place we find when closing eyes, coin-shut.
I’m good enough? My works paved paradise?
An entity…who’s there? Fear look… I stare.
My history’s like dandelion seeds.

Wide or narrow, a path of no escape.
Eternity, in endless waves, fallout?
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful "Between Here and Eternity" write. Great questions here. Will there be another write with the answer??? Have a blessed day with win..............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 5:36 PM
Is there an answer ? or do we ponder... Thank you, Paula!
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 2:58 PM
You vividly painted such thoughts of this sphere of life and its fragility Kim <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, BJ!
Hind Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 6:42 PM
this is so honest and I can really feel your feelings, beautiful- "My history’s like dandelion seeds." hugs Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, Paige!
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