Between a Rock and a Hard Place

Life was a burden till death set me free - Now granite gravestone being hard on me?! November 15, 2021
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Radice Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 1:24 PM
I feel your pressure both during and after life. :) This made me smile Margarita. Congratulations on your win in Brian's competition. Cheers - Gary
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 6:10 PM
Cheers! Thank you. M.
Gondolf Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Clever writing, Maggie, nicely done. Hugs, John
Lillico  Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 4:15 PM
That old age wisdom:) M.
Leffanta Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 10:54 AM
Ergo, it finally sinks in that death is not a recommended remedy for an headache? Enjoyed!
Lillico  Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Frees the pain however :) Meant to be humorous...:) M.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Amazing words. Inspired and so creative. God bless you. Love, Gina
Lillico  Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Thank you. M.
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:17 PM
You can't win, Margarita: Life is hard, then you die and get a granite gravestone. Who said death was fair, anyway? Smiles, Gershon
Lillico  Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Can't win:)
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Gravestones can be hard on the eyes Margarita, and some burdens we do indeed take to the grave, but I hope it's all lighthearted humour, cheers David
Lillico  Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Humor it is... until it is not :) M.
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