Between a Rock and a Hard Place

Life was a burden till death set me free - Now granite gravestone being hard on me?! November 15, 2021

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Gary Radice

Date: 12/27/2021 1:24:00 PM

I feel your pressure both during and after life. :) This made me smile Margarita. Congratulations on your win in Brian's competition. Cheers - Gary

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 6:10:00 PM

Cheers! Thank you. M.

John Gondolf

Date: 11/16/2021 10:59:00 AM

Clever writing, Maggie, nicely done. Hugs, John

Margarita Lillico
Date: 11/26/2021 4:15:00 PM

That old age wisdom:) M.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/16/2021 10:54:00 AM

Ergo, it finally sinks in that death is not a recommended remedy for an headache? Enjoyed!

Margarita Lillico
Date: 11/26/2021 4:16:00 PM

Frees the pain however :) Meant to be humorous...:) M.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/16/2021 6:54:00 AM

Amazing words. Inspired and so creative. God bless you. Love, Gina

Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:06:00 AM

Thank you. M.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/15/2021 8:17:00 PM

You can't win, Margarita: Life is hard, then you die and get a granite gravestone. Who said death was fair, anyway? Smiles, Gershon

Margarita Lillico
Date: 11/26/2021 4:16:00 PM

Can't win:)

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/15/2021 3:29:00 PM

Gravestones can be hard on the eyes Margarita, and some burdens we do indeed take to the grave, but I hope it's all lighthearted humour, cheers David

Margarita Lillico
Date: 11/26/2021 4:17:00 PM

Humor it is... until it is not :) M.