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Better with Time

The lines on the leaf show age and a seasons end but colors shine bright..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/10/2012 8:50:00 PM
what a wonderful world this is.... xox~pd
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Date: 9/28/2010 11:35:00 AM
Lovely in a way that tells time will always be on our side. Grace is the best light for any line or color of nature. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/28/2010 9:15:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku poetry today Michael. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:20:00 AM
Thinking about it now, loads of things get better with time... Beautiful haiku Michael, love Wilma
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:40:00 AM
this really is a beautiful haiku ... sigh Love Jayne
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:55:00 AM
well constructed and nicely done..
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Date: 9/27/2010 10:31:00 PM
oh lovely one Michael.. if for the contest.. good luck .. J.G. forever..to W.K..
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:33:00 PM
I like to think I'm that way too, Michael...getting brighter with age! Wonderful autumn haiku. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:52:00 PM
The same could be said of people, Michael. Their "colors" and witty approach to life seem to shine brighter as they age. Great work, Diane
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