Better With Time

The lines on the leaf
show age and a seasons end
but colors shine bright..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 10, 2012 at 8:50 PM
what a wonderful world this is.... xox~pd
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September 28, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Lovely in a way that tells time will always be on our side. Grace is the best light for any line or color of nature. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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September 28, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku poetry today Michael. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Thinking about it now, loads of things get better with time... Beautiful haiku Michael, love Wilma
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September 28, 2010 at 5:40 AM
this really is a beautiful haiku ... sigh Love Jayne
Lelitte Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 4:55 AM
well constructed and nicely done..
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September 27, 2010 at 10:31 PM
oh lovely one Michael.. if for the contest.. good luck .. J.G. forever..to W.K..
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September 27, 2010 at 1:33 PM
I like to think I'm that way too, Michael...getting brighter with age! Wonderful autumn haiku. Love, Carolyn
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September 27, 2010 at 12:52 PM
The same could be said of people, Michael. Their "colors" and witty approach to life seem to shine brighter as they age. Great work, Diane
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