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better way to live


busy folk walking
its in hospital I lie
I hear staff talking
softly accommodating
spend my last moments waiting

give a man my heart
when his own stops and wont start
better way to live 
this is what I want to give
take cells blood every last part

truth everyone dies
she cant see- give her my eyes
donation is wise
take vocal chords to help chat
brain just for a democrat
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Narain Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 10:00 AM
Wisdom from a virtuous person.
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