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Better Than the Greatest Dream

Wow, this is so much different than the life I know. I’m floating. Watch me go. I don’t see my body anymore. I just see light. I don’t understand how I…. It’s like… How do I explain? This is better than peace Better than what we call love The most love, The best love Where I’m from wouldnt be enough Compared to what I’m feeling now Wait.. is this love? If not its better! I see a man in white Surrounded by the brightest light He smile and says Hi Welcome my child In my heart, I knew who No smile is better than his No one made me feel more love Not even close to this He said ,go back and tell them so They would believe. I told him how much I love him And that I didn’t want to leave I didn’t want to go back espacaily after what I Been through He said don’t worry my child,I love you. I will always Be with you. I will never leave you. I didn’t want to let go of his hand As I started to go back, he kept saying It’s ok…it’s ok…it’s ok.. I’m in the hospital I finally awake My family was cryin happy Doctors were amazed

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Date: 1/9/2014 6:30:00 PM
Beautiful experience Christy, God is love. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/6/2013 4:33:00 PM
what an incredible journey.
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Date: 10/8/2013 3:58:00 PM
Beautiful and a powerful experience
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Date: 9/5/2013 9:14:00 AM
While I have never had a "medical" related out-of-body experience (only psychedelic lol), I have been on a gurney in an ER clinging to life more than once (overdoses). You told me you felt my poem; well, I definitely feel yours as well. I felt like I was right there with you; strong imagery and emotion pervasive throughout the piece. Great work! :)
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