"better Than Caffeine"

The blanket slides down

                        the view in morning sun light

                                                          your my coffee start.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ruebel Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 11:23 AM
Hello Michael, How beautiful this is. Such a wonderful way to awaken. Lucky Guy As Always, Shar
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November 22, 2010 at 3:42 PM
he he he! wow! Michale, i love this one,, very much, imagine that ,,love is better than caffeine! but, too bad for me that my love lives way over in Oregon,, so!,, Right now I have to drink caffeine,, until I'm over there with him. It must be nice to wake up to the smell of love instead of folders~ who? makes my wake up great..,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
Freeman Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Hard to imagine anything that would beat caffeine, Michael. Smile! But! I thin=k you exposed it. LOL Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 5:14 AM
Well my White Knight ..your poetry is so much better than that horrible game last night... I had to finish following the score online.. my eyes could not take it any longer.. cannot believe the BOO BIRDS are on top of the NFC East.. this is a tragic day in the world of football to me.. hope your day is bright and cheery but being a true GIANTS fan.. I feel and share your pain today luv.. Jersey Girl in mourning ... luv..
Fraser Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Now that's what I call an awakening, simply stunning Senyru Michael >> James
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 3:19 PM
oohh la la, yes, who needs coffee???
Loving Iii Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 2:54 PM
as long as they open by themselves i'm fine. john
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November 21, 2010 at 1:18 PM
This is a beautiful write. THanks for your kind comment. Jancarl
Sweetheart Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 1:04 PM
OK .. I am so up for this one Michael.. a lovely picture u painted in early morning .. u have a beautiful muse to awaken u too..luv.. and u took the words out of Ron's mouth today luv.. all these great men thinking alike..scary ...and romantic.. JG. praying for our GIANTS tonight my White Knight...
Roberts Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 10:33 AM
wonderful senryu Michael
Onclaud Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 9:21 AM
this senryu has a stirring, playful pacing.. lovely, michael.. your visit to threads ia a delight.. thank you. warmest, nette
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 8:25 AM
Nice romantic thoughts of the morning. Michael. Thanks for your comments on senses and I visited your Paper voices, you have conveyed it better than me,
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November 21, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Your lovely senryu evokes images of the electricity of passion, Michael. Indeed, seeing such a sight in the morning can be better than a caffeine boost! Love, Carolyn
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November 21, 2010 at 7:52 AM
I betcha most guys would enjoy that kind of cuppa or that visuals to wake up to.. Enjoy your coffee and I will enjoy the magic you create.. Love Wilma
Fields Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Thank you for your comment on "Wallpapered, Soloed Nudity" Well! I do blush at the sight of this poem! And I make this statement, that with so little words. You have amazed me with a bigger smile, than the last we meet with words.Till next we read again , my Favored Poet!
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