Better Than a Pill

I’m out on a bench in the sun;
It’s cold, so my time’s almost done
But to be here’s important to me – 
I’m getting my Vitamin D!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:16 PM
I love my vitamin D! Glad you gave the sun a tribute today!
Watt Avatar
February 28, 2022 at 12:01 PM
here's to more vitamin d (d for daylight)! love the way you think... you've inspired me to go take a walk
Leffanta Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 10:17 AM
They say only 15-minutes of direct sunshine per day will keep your eyes healthy . . ..Enjoy! Aloha!
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 6:10 AM
- I have to go out every day no matter the weather ... out to get fresh air and sun ... lovely poem, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 8:14 PM
Ha, ha! Short, sweet, and discrete! Bet no one realized you were getting your daily dose of Vitamin D! Smiles, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 3:04 PM
I hope someday they'll put your name on that bench, Ilene. You deserve it. Think of all the fine ideas you've come up with on that bench!
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