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Better Than a Pill

I’m out on a bench in the sun; It’s cold, so my time’s almost done But to be here’s important to me – I’m getting my Vitamin D!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 3/4/2022 12:16:00 PM
I love my vitamin D! Glad you gave the sun a tribute today!
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Date: 2/28/2022 12:01:00 PM
here's to more vitamin d (d for daylight)! love the way you think... you've inspired me to go take a walk
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Date: 2/27/2022 10:17:00 AM
They say only 15-minutes of direct sunshine per day will keep your eyes healthy . . ..Enjoy! Aloha!
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Date: 2/27/2022 6:10:00 AM
- I have to go out every day no matter the weather ... out to get fresh air and sun ... lovely poem, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2022 8:14:00 PM
Ha, ha! Short, sweet, and discrete! Bet no one realized you were getting your daily dose of Vitamin D! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 2/26/2022 3:04:00 PM
I hope someday they'll put your name on that bench, Ilene. You deserve it. Think of all the fine ideas you've come up with on that bench!
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