Better Place

Your arms that shield me in the storm
Your eyes that swore I'll never be alone
Those kisses that burn me when it's cold
My love,you gave me life that I lost.


The freedom I owe to you,
I am breathing because of you.
A peaceful mind and a happy soul,
A place we'll share until we're old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Schack Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:41 AM
deep.
Mcconnell Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 12:39 AM
Lovely pen Aiyah, nice romantic piece. Blessings from Scotland, Gordon
Wise Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 4:50 AM
This is lovely.
Kendrick Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Passionate work penned in this one. Thanks for sharing today. Sara
Tor Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 3:18 AM
Lovely Poetry Aiyah for that special someone. Me encanta...
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