Better Pakistan

Tears in my eyes, pain in my heart
The country my forefathers fought for
Lost in the pathetic battle of politics
Bloodshed keeps ascending, dirty politicians
Forgotten land, hopes, and dreams
grow thinner every day. The air tastes like poison
Sectarianism is a virus eating us alive 
The feces of poverty, insecurity, and terrorism

O Pakistan, rise from the forgotten sands
The cords of religion are strangling us
Discrimination is a mountain of birds
Education is a right for all
The unnoticed goodbyes are too much
Burdens of the heart, faded warm embrace
Let the journey begin, a new step of reformation
Our struggles are been stacked like bricks 

Chase the darkness away
One people, one Pakistan
Many good things have been done
A sea of ugly happenings, kill
Time to face the unknown, brave
Let write our take in ink and with fire
We are here, hope breathes like
A burning candle; better Pakistan

With Habakkuk Kargbo (Rabbi)
Poem Makers SL (17/04/24)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about Pakistan, so patriotic, through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Kargbo Avatar
April 25, 2024 at 5:12 AM
Thanx
Kargbo Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 8:42 PM
Thanx.
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