Better Make This One Good

BETTER MAKE THIS ONE GOOD

It’s all succinct until we leap.
Of this day, for three, not a peep.
Grow older, slower — now that’s deep.
February Twenty-ninth!

On horseback, knight awaits orders,
until day he can leave borders,
leap past the square, stun recorders,
once every four years.

Frog taps fingers on lily pad.
A little bored, a little sad.
What takes so long - has he been had?
He’s over this!

What if taking a leap of faith
haunted you for four years - a wraith.
To take leap you’d have to have faith.
What a conundrum!

2020 is a leap year.
Some blessed birthday child will cheer
and down her cheek their rolls a tear.
Better make this one good!

1/23/2020
Great Leap Forward Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Beth Evans
Used: Tail Rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/23/2020 11:34:00 AM
This poem is a winner in any contest, Kim. You are on such a poetry "roll of magnifience"!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thanks so much! Tomorrow the muse may take a break...who knows! :)
Date: 1/23/2020 10:07:00 AM
I get your natural association between leap year and leaping frogs. It was a 'good one'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2020 10:10:00 AM
Thank you!
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