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Better days new song version

Better days

He's lying on the ground...
no mercy to be found...
He begs and pleads and says
that he can't breathe

The world keeps looking on...
human dignity is gone...
I pray to God to help
next time it could be me


Chorus
So I'm choking on a truth
that's seldom heard...
Justice falls down to the
ground without a word
Another day goes by, 
and nothing seems to change
Pray that soon will come better days


The Minnesota sky...
gets blacker every night...
The world is watching and
joins in the fight


So many years have passed...
the colors they still clash...
We hope and pray some day
it'll be alright


Chorus 2
I see the cards are stacked against 
me in the deck...
How can I live, with your knee
pressed on my neck?
Another day goes by...
and nothing seems to change
I pray, that soon,
will come... better days


Chorus
So I'm choking on a truth
that's seldom heard...
Justice falls down to the
ground without a word
Another day goes by, 
and nothing seems to change
Pray that soon will come better days


Pray that soon will come better days
Pray that soon will come better days
Pray that soon will come better days

June 05,2020
John Derek Hamilton
revised with music and vocals July 1
posted August 28,2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 2:26 PM
Send this to Blake Shelton, would be a perfect fit. Loved it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Hamilton Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Cay Cay yes I think he would do well with it. Unfortunately most established singers don't want to share song credit and royalties that's why I haven't found any major artists to cover one of my songs, but...maybe soon!
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