Better Days Ahead

    Minutes before the Sabbath comes in
       but so much undone, almost a sin

    Yet time to put the past week away
       ~ Regroup and pray for better days
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Elliott Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 4:46 PM
Amen to that, good poetry friend. We put our trust in Hashem for many reasons. The dawn will come. Am Yisrael Chai!
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Yes. The dawn will come. And we will be ready. ~ Standing up for What is Right!
Greenhough Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 8:36 PM
I like this idea.
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:10 PM
And it likes you too, Hilda. Cheers, Gershon
Maverick Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Well i'm just wondering how your day is now? As you will have noticed its me.' I am quite Incorrigable.' Oh you know.? My oh my G W.. And you left a comment..On a write..The other Night.? I don't know.' You could be getting impetous..A great word btw (maybe it will give Me impetus..One can never say.? Anyway i'm Ecouraged...Do you know what that means?? I Shall not say here..Rather I shall retire And consider my onions..Er I mean options.!.' No laughing btw recall 2020 And laughs being Contagious
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:08 PM
Let's see now. What rhymes with impetus?! lol. Like you wrote, Joe: Laughter is contagious! thanks, Gershon
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Yes. Re-group and pray for better days. :)
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 8:40 PM
Praying hard here, Heidi. Hope all is well with you! ~ Gershon
Jones Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 9:24 PM
I like this!
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 8:38 PM
It likes you too, Karen! Thanks, gw
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