Better Bide With Breeze
To last dots if man
Plans, and life not that way pans
Out, what avail plans?
Life’s most moving moments race,
Pass by like breeze, not a trace!
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Reflections |13.12.2022| Tanka, life
Poet’s note: This Tanka is born of some unease on how to live life. Of late it seems that man tends to plan too much, and when things do not that way pan out, he finds faults with life. This poem wonders if one should go with the breeze.
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