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Better Bide With Breeze

To last dots if man Plans, and life not that way pans Out, what avail plans? Life’s most moving moments race, Pass by like breeze, not a trace! _______________________________ Reflections |13.12.2022| Tanka, life Poet’s note: This Tanka is born of some unease on how to live life. Of late it seems that man tends to plan too much, and when things do not that way pan out, he finds faults with life. This poem wonders if one should go with the breeze.

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Date: 12/23/2022 4:24:00 AM
Go with the breeze and enjoy what life can bring. "Life is a matter of attitude", the saying goes.
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