Betrayed Love.

The cloud was thick and dark.
The rainbow has refused to come up in the sky
The sun of all would not even shine anymore.
There are no traces of a star in the sky.
Suddenly, like an angel, she appeared from 
amidst the thickness of the clouds, she came forth
bringing with her the rays of hope and faith and joy.
Little did I know this hope wasn't going to last.
If I had knew, would I have built a beautiful world around you?
Would I have made you the pillar of my strength and joy?
Would I have allowed myself to be carried away,
If I knew it was going to be short-lived?
I fell for the deceit of assurance over again.
Then I realize how painful it is to see those we truly love
walk out of our lives.
There ain't anything as painful as it, but you know,
What pains the most is when they make us believe they love us
when in the real sense of it, they don't!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 26, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Ayomikun. Love, Carol
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February 25, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Congrats on your winning poem in the Betrayal contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write from a wonderful poet.. enjoy this victory.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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February 25, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Congratualtions on your massive win in starflixer's sponsored contest' BETRAYAL"
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January 24, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Loved the whole story you have put together with a poem. Enjoy your night. :)
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January 17, 2010 at 8:09 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. if u entered this in the Betrayal contest good luck to u .. well written and expressive.. continue your creative writings to share with us all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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January 17, 2010 at 9:26 AM
I feel your pain Ayomikum. But as hard as it is, take heart and know that you've learned something from this and because of that you can bring to the next relationship and make it better. The sun will shine once again. Peace, Audrey P.S. Keep writing and go read the works of others. You will find inspiration, comfort, and friendship
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January 16, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Mikun, beautiful poem.
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January 16, 2010 at 2:56 AM
True. it pains alot when people swear and lie that they love you. good poem
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