Betrayed

Fragile, but already broken.
Pieces gone, holes in my soul.
Knock me down with a feather.
Kill me with a whisper.
I'm draining the ocean a tear at a time
And I can't swim through the blackness.
Far away echoes of hope
Reverberate through my head
But are too weak to reach my heart.
My fingers cling achingly to the ledge of
Possibilities of tomorrow,
Preferable possibilities of no tomorrow.
I climb towards the light
Only to find it has blinded those who
Claim to worship it.
So I sink back down
From the weight of their righteousness,
Cursed to see light, but unworthy to live it
Because my eyes are open.
Faith massages my weary being
That longs to rest in accepting arms.
One. More. Day.
                                                                      5/14/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 16, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Cindi, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "SEIZE THE DAY." Celebrate with me. WUV **SKAT**
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September 16, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thank you!
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November 16, 2015 at 9:20 PM
awesome win. SKAT
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November 16, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Thank you. Big fan of your work!
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November 16, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Cindi, your poem has been handled with lot of care! Congrats!
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November 16, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Thank you so much!
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November 16, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations Cindi
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November 16, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Thank you.
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 6:09 AM
great write Cindi congrats on win hugs
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July 27, 2015 at 2:41 AM
Congrats on ur winning masterpiece Cindi!
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July 26, 2015 at 4:35 PM
Cindi, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
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