Betrayed

I shared with you something so special to me.
I let loose something I can't take back.
Today, you hurt me calling her baby
Making those funny comments.
I hurt deep inside.
A softer part died
The tears stay unshed
I am drowning where my soul dwells.
My emotions, so confused, as am I.
The deepest part of my heart
Holds tight to the past.
When can I release?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 5, 2010 at 10:00 AM
LOVED YOUR BETRAYED POEM.I UNDERSTAND THE DEEPER THE TEARS .THE DEEPER A POEM GETS. YOUR POEM IS SO DEEP .ITS HARD FOR ONE TO RELEASE. GOOD POEM....I.T.
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