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Betrayed

Injustices larger than life Rage still trembling Through my weary body Still in total disbelief The assault of my heart My soul my life My mind shattered in disillusion Imploding my whole belief system Betrayed Feeling ever so vulnerable Marooned Disillusioned Deeply hurt Brutally attacked With blows Directly to the heart AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 25, 2018

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Date: 11/27/2018 7:14:00 PM
Betrayal is a horrible thing; after so much, one loses trust and things should not be that way. Well penned.
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:04:00 PM
So true. Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Date: 11/25/2018 9:14:00 PM
This perfect poem hurts my heart but it is so well expressed that I can't help but FAVE it. :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 9:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Carole. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2018 3:35:00 PM
Do I need to get on a plane, my friend? If so, you might have to wait until Christmas break. I will be off on the 22nd.
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Date: 11/25/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. It will all be settled way before then. But I so appreciate the offer. Line xx
Date: 11/25/2018 11:47:00 AM
Those heart shots do hurt! Nice one
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Date: 11/25/2018 1:05:00 PM
Thanks, Jay, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/25/2018 9:37:00 AM
Very well expressed. Powerful to be felt! Whew! Good one Line :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 1:05:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.

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