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Betrayal of the Soul

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Young
Mother
Rocks baby
Singing  happy song
Love in its purity bonding
Daddy slips into the arms of another woman

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/24/2010 5:34:00 PM

Dear Sara, My bad! If YOU entered this in Star Flixers s.s.s Contest "Betrayal" Good LUCK I see YOU in the Winner's Circle Congratulations LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/24/2010 5:23:00 PM

Dear Sara, Superb Write I enjoy this Form and even more so when YOU Write it I have a hard time with the Concept in this Poem Why would a man ever enter another Woman's arms?? LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Donielle Smith

Date: 2/23/2010 9:08:00 AM

Hi, this is a truthfully said poem. It happens all the time. Keep Writing! ~ D. Smith

Jo Bien

Date: 2/21/2010 5:05:00 PM

I like the simplicity of this Sara....JB

Isa Mahrie

Date: 2/16/2010 7:21:00 AM

a very well Written ...reflection of a true event on social lives

Edward Ford

Date: 2/14/2010 12:21:00 PM

Eloquently composed and yet a sad but all to frequent truth

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/13/2010 5:10:00 PM

Someone bit into the apple long ago. All too common behavior. Temptation is powerful as you express well in your ode. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/13/2010 10:20:00 AM

Happens all the time. so sad.. and thank you for your comment Sara. The emotion of her was not angry. i don't think i worded it right. i meant to make the readers feel that though this was a 'too deep decision' she did it because she wanted to make him see.she didn't want to get even. Anyway, your poem reminds me of my parents a while ago. -Always Lynette

Danny Nunn

Date: 2/13/2010 3:30:00 AM

Very true words and it happens many times in this old world, good write...Thanks on Hard Knocks...sometimes those are good teachers, we seems to remember better??? Thanks Danny

Brian Strand

Date: 2/13/2010 12:48:00 AM

A too familar tale Sara.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/12/2010 6:38:00 PM

Oh! OUch...! A horrible betrayal indeed, Sara! A well written poem in this format. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/12/2010 5:28:00 PM

bad dad!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2010 4:38:00 PM

oh, wow, this one is really good, sara, I really like this type of poetry! Luv, Andrea

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2010 12:48:00 PM

you need the gun. john

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/12/2010 9:35:00 AM

Same old story, Sara. It never ends. Well-written Fibonacci! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 6:54:00 AM

Oh, that's not good, is it? Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/12/2010 5:53:00 AM

so sad, some men don't deal well with a new baby? Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2010 5:29:00 AM

Wow ... a good entry for the Betrayal contest Sara... luv this one lots... its a message all too often playing out in the world today.. SOUP MAIL... luv.. LInda-Marie