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Betrayal

( BETRAYAL ) An echo fades into the night, an eerie mournful sound. A shooting star disappears from sight, and I crumble to the ground. There is no life within this garden; my sobs are the only sound. I have poisoned the honeyed fountain where your love could be found. Dazed, I stare at the stars above, my grieving howls fill the night! Unintended betrayal of love has hidden you from my sight. I remember how it used to be when we shared our fears and delights. You are a treasured friend to me. How can I make things right? Feeling afraid, cold and lonely, I long to tell you how I feel, but you don`t want to hear me. The pain for you is much too real. Should I back away and build a wall and block away how I feel? Or, should I give you a call? We both need some time to heal. An echo fades into the night as our friendship disappears. How do I know what is right? How can I ease my fears? If I do call you again, would the old wounds reappear? I can`t stand to cause you pain. Hurting you again is my worst fear! (c) Jasmine Paul 11-18-2014

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Date: 11/18/2014 12:17:00 PM
These are old deep questions that go back to the beginning of time . . . love and forgiveness go hand in hand . . . loved the poem -- you captured the tortured soul wrestling with itself.
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/19/2014 6:36:00 PM
Thanks David. Sorry I havent been on much been pulling doubles at work.

Book: Shattered Sighs