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Everyday, I think of you. Everyday I think of what could have been the truth. You thought you could show people someone that wasn't there. You thought you could show us, that you really truly cared. You've said your apologies and we thought you meant every word. Once that occurred I thought I was back to being your one and only little girl. However later on, we discovered that we were fooled. There was another and slang, I as a teenager would say that that wasn't very cool. You left us without an explanation. We only had one clue, and it was all about temptation. You gave in, to someone who wasn't entirely yours. When you were caught, lies flowed through all of your thick heavy pores. I was in shock and in disbelieve. Maybe if you had confessed, we would have felt some amount of relief. Still you were quiet. Went somewhere and stayed clear out of view. In time, we found out were you where, from someone we hardly knew. You stayed put and refused to come back. We tried all means but you acted as though you were being attacked. I miss the old you. I miss the thoughtful things you used to do. You have no idea what we're going through. Now I’ve just been hearing things and hoped that they were not true. I feel betrayed, for you have been keeping secrets from us. There is now very little loyalty left and most of

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Date: 6/10/2014 9:06:00 AM
I'm loving your work! This is great!
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:28:00 AM
MImi, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:18:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Mimi
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Date: 6/8/2014 12:59:00 PM
Thanks everyone for the warm welcomes and lovely comments! its great to be here and cant wait to share more of my poetry with everyone
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:52:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mimi :) - I choose your first well written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:07:00 AM
HI MIMI , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/7/2014 1:58:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Mimi. I bring a wish that you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/6/2014 6:01:00 PM
Mimi,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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