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Betrayal

Betrayal A BIG black hole in my heart where the cutting wind blows through. Jeralynn Clark

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Colleen Bono

Date: 1/25/2010 8:38:00 AM

good morning Jeralynn.Hope you are well.

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/24/2010 4:38:00 PM

YOU HAVE SOUP MAIL...

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/24/2010 2:35:00 PM

sounds like a winner.Just wanted to stop by and say hello and hope all is well with you.

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/23/2010 3:53:00 PM

Thank you for everything.

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/20/2010 2:25:00 PM

That sounds like betrayal! Great visual given with poem. Thanks for sharing.

Colleen Bono

Date: 1/19/2010 8:46:00 AM

New poem posted

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 4:27:00 PM

OH, I really like this one. Right to the point!!! Luv, Andrea

Gail Dufresne

Date: 1/12/2010 6:02:00 PM

Wow! That's a winner for sure. Tells a "hole" story. Gail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2010 4:23:00 AM

Very descriptive write expressing the pain of love lose. I can feel the pain. Keep the creative and expressive writes flowing. Sara

Linda Witt-King

Date: 1/12/2010 2:24:00 AM

Yep, that's what it feels like alright. Excellently portrayed.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/11/2010 5:33:00 PM

hmmmm I dare say, this sounds like a true life experience to be felt and described in this manner. excellent feel write, Jeralynn! God bless you and thanks for your welcome kind comments and also the best of luck in these contests with your worthy entries! love,Robert