Betrayal

Betrayal

A BIG black hole
in my heart
where the cutting wind
blows through.

Jeralynn Clark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bono Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 8:38 AM
good morning Jeralynn.Hope you are well.
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January 24, 2010 at 4:38 PM
YOU HAVE SOUP MAIL...
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January 24, 2010 at 2:35 PM
sounds like a winner.Just wanted to stop by and say hello and hope all is well with you.
Bono Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Thank you for everything.
Hilliker Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 2:25 PM
That sounds like betrayal! Great visual given with poem. Thanks for sharing.
Bono Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 8:46 AM
New poem posted
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 4:27 PM
OH, I really like this one. Right to the point!!! Luv, Andrea
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January 12, 2010 at 6:02 PM
Wow! That's a winner for sure. Tells a "hole" story. Gail
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 4:23 AM
Very descriptive write expressing the pain of love lose. I can feel the pain. Keep the creative and expressive writes flowing. Sara
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January 12, 2010 at 2:24 AM
Yep, that's what it feels like alright. Excellently portrayed.
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January 11, 2010 at 5:33 PM
hmmmm I dare say, this sounds like a true life experience to be felt and described in this manner. excellent feel write, Jeralynn! God bless you and thanks for your welcome kind comments and also the best of luck in these contests with your worthy entries! love,Robert
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