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Betrayal

Foes betray. This, friends, might be as true as great gospel-truth. How painful is it when friends betray? Like constant sore tooth? Like dagger-dug bleeding-heart? Head-hunted humans howling? Or human corpse-filled carts? More than that, I'd say, friends. Chocking! Do not betray, friends! One betrayal is hundred murders! Could, killer of even one murder be love-adorers...? 03 January 2022 Bite Size Poem #31 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/6/2022 7:52:00 PM

Hello Christuraj ... betrayal by a friend feels like a dagger through the heart and destroys trust - thanks Christuraj - Lindsay

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/15/2022 9:43:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/3/2022 8:22:00 AM

True friends are loyal! Those who betray you are unworthy of our friendship! The unkindest cut of all is one done by a so-called "friend." Excellent piece - good luck in the contest! Pandita

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/3/2022 9:23:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Bill Baker

Date: 1/3/2022 8:11:00 AM

It is important to be faithful to friends, Christuraj. Good luck in contest. Happy New Year! Bill

Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/3/2022 8:13:00 AM

Thank you very much.