Betor's Jack

Whinny Winey on the track
The coluber bravoing at his back
The betor keen on his kale
Here goes the whistle
Spectators applauded Round the clock 
Whinny Winey to the finish line potted the betor's jack.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!--------Lori
Freeman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Swairik, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Betor's Jack" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Swairik. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:25 AM
hey Swairik congrats on your win..David
Ramsdale Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:53 AM
A 6th place congratulations my friend for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:52 AM
congrats Swairik on top ten win with this great Alliteration poetry luv..
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