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Best Toy For An Imaginative Girl

Tiny package under the tree Could not be my wish come true But note inside addressed to me Leads me to something shiny new Standing proud in the driveway The thing I very most desire A bicycle red finally came my way! Of this gift I'd never tire At times this bike would be a horse Steady gait then galloping free Nostrils flaring and snorting of course As I pressed in with my knee Now the bike's a Harley grand Eating the highway as we go Leather seat and steel kickstand Tires trimmed and built for show A race car and a speedboat too Many things this bike became Like the years it took me through This bike was never once the same ** for "TOYLAND" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie Sweetheart Of PS

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Date: 1/5/2011 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda. deb
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:19:00 PM
this one is very imaginative how you told the story of your bike. I too loved my bike but I had to work all summer and buy it myself. haha. Congratulations on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:21:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your success in my Toyland contest... my winners list finally posted tonight luv...
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:38:00 PM
thankxxx for supporting my current contest Deb ..good luck and happy holidays with luv..
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Date: 12/20/2010 11:48:00 AM
Very write on bicycle as a toy, Deb
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Date: 12/20/2010 9:23:00 AM
Appreciate your support of my current contest Deb and good luck ..will read fully closer to judging time but know it will be most excellent .. with luv..
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:29:00 AM
Oh wow, you had a tranformer bicycle Deb ;) really enjoyed your imagery with this gem.. Good luck for Linda's contest! take care Wilma
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:12:00 AM
My bike sometimes sprouted wings and we flew through the skies, Deb. Good luck with this creative entry.
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