Best Suicide Note

Hi ho Hi Ho It’s off the edge I go…..
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Wolf Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 7:42 PM
Pretty wacky there, Caren. ~ Dwarfman
Krutsinger Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 11:57 PM
I know.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Did I say your one liner was good…of course it was.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Thank you Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Oh boy. My nephew wrote a suicide song talking to his parents and sibling by name. The refrain was haunting. Two years later he killed himself. At the time he put it out, he was in a good place…before the pandemic. It was a good song, sad, poignant, haunting and well sung. I pray he’s in heaven…I believe he is. <3
Krutsinger Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:58 PM
I know he is Kim. I know it.
Hankins Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 4:12 PM
Oh my. I feel just like John! Why am I LOL?
Hankins Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 11:14 AM
You need to enter this into the epigram contest on Soup. It's perfect. It even rhymes!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 9:34 PM
I have no idea, but this came out of nowhere - thanks Trixie!
Lawless Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 3:02 PM
THIS IS SO BAD.....and yet I am LMAO....
Krutsinger Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 9:33 PM
John, I was so shocked when I wrote this and realized how funny it was! And I have had suicides in my family, and I still liked it.
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