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Best Suicide Note

Hi ho Hi Ho It’s off the edge I go…..

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Date: 4/23/2022 7:42:00 PM
Pretty wacky there, Caren. ~ Dwarfman
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/24/2022 11:57:00 PM
I know.
Date: 4/23/2022 8:13:00 AM
Did I say your one liner was good…of course it was.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/23/2022 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 4/23/2022 8:12:00 AM
Oh boy. My nephew wrote a suicide song talking to his parents and sibling by name. The refrain was haunting. Two years later he killed himself. At the time he put it out, he was in a good place…before the pandemic. It was a good song, sad, poignant, haunting and well sung. I pray he’s in heaven…I believe he is. <3
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/23/2022 3:58:00 PM
I know he is Kim. I know it.
Date: 4/22/2022 4:12:00 PM
Oh my. I feel just like John! Why am I LOL?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/24/2022 11:14:00 AM
You need to enter this into the epigram contest on Soup. It's perfect. It even rhymes!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/22/2022 9:34:00 PM
I have no idea, but this came out of nowhere - thanks Trixie!
Date: 4/22/2022 3:02:00 PM
THIS IS SO BAD.....and yet I am LMAO....
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/22/2022 9:33:00 PM
John, I was so shocked when I wrote this and realized how funny it was! And I have had suicides in my family, and I still liked it.

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